Happy Monday, all.
So this is what I have so far on the story (the Untitled Fragment) from below: http://kristirhymesslant.blogspot.com/p/short-story-untitled-and-unfinished.html
You can also find it, and my other writings, on the right-hand side bar thingy.
Feedback would be lovely! I'm turning it in next week for workshop, and would love to hear comments/criticism. Or just basic support, like "Kristi, you aren't an awful writer, at least!" That would work, too.
Heehee, annnnyyyways. Enjoy!